My husband likes to say “perfect is the enemy of good.”
In the writing world, perfect is the enemy of publication.
(Before you choke on your chai latte, I’m not advocating
shipping out your fresh NaNoWriMo manuscript on December first. Not even close! Bear with me
here . . . :D)
You spend months (or years or weeks) writing your novel. You spend days grinding out words, getting your story on paper. You spend afternoons
frantically scribbling your latest epiphany on random receipts from your
purse while waiting in the carpool line, and nights typing the scene that
blasted fully formed into your brain as you cobbled together dinner. You give up tv,
sleep, and the hope that the laundry pile will ever shrink to acceptable
levels, and anything else that has room to give so you can write--because you
have to.
And when you’ve worked and struggled and dug your characters
out of the deepest, darkest holes borne of your sleep-deprived writerly state,
you type THE END. You feel absolutely giddy (which may or may not be related to
the fact that you haven’t slept in weeks.) But you’re DONE! See, you tell your spouse, your best friends, your
mother or anyone else who will listen, or maybe you just tell yourself: there
it is! In Times New Roman font!
THE END.
And yet, it’s just the beginning.
If you’re lucky, your first
draft is good. As in, a good start. It’s
readable, full of promise, peppered with potholes and speed bumps and missing
bridges and all the other things that clutter the writing road on the way to a
polished draft.
So you step back, and let your manuscript marinate for a few
weeks. AND DON'T PEEK. (And for goodness sake, DON'T QUERY. Fight the urge any
way possible. I recommend chocolate. :D) Two weeks pass, maybe three. Then you
open up your Word document, and there on the very first page sits the title and
your name. And you think, Oohhhh… so pretty.
And you start reading. You waffle between Oh my
gracious, this is amazing! I wrote this? to
the much more frequent Holy crap, this IS crap. I wrote this? Some people (like me) edit as they go, others read
through all the way then dig in.* Either way, you edit. You revise. And you
send your edited first draft to
your beta readers, your all-important crit partners.
And then you wait--again. You pass the time drafting your
query, stalking following agents on Twitter or Querytracker or their
blog, and compiling your all-important query list.
You get your feedback, and naturally, it’s all over the
place. But some is consistent, and that reveals where work is needed. Sometimes it's an inconsistency you missed, maybe it’s a spot you already suspected had a problem. Maybe no one will notice, maybe
it’s not that BIG a problem. But it is, and
you fix it. You listen to the remaining (and conflicting) critiques with an
open mind and then you revise. You dig back in, fix any
lingering potholes or build a bridge you didn’t even realize was necessary--all
while keeping your vision of the story intact (after all, it’s your novel :D).
Maybe you need another round of crits, maybe not. You’ll
know whether fresh eyes are needed; trust your writer’s compass--both in
handling the crits and knowing when your novel is done.
Here’s where perfection can become your enemy.
Let’s recap: at this point you’ve (1) finished your
manuscript, (2) let it marinate, (3) revised and polished it, (4) sent it to
crit partners and listened to their feedback, (5) revised and polished again
based on your critiques, and (6) possibly repeated numbers 4 and
5.
Meanwhile, you also have a carefully-researched list of
agents who might be interested in your YA
vampire-werewolf-love-triangle-set-in-a-dystopian-future-where-the-vamps-and-wolves-must-fight-zombies-in-an-arena-and-only-one-suitor-can-survive.
(Ahem. Or whatever.) And you have a concise, hook-y, query letter ready to
roll--personalized, natch.
Anyway, if you’re not careful, as you hit Step 6 and polish your novel until it sparkles like Edward in sunlight, you might slip from revision, which is meaty, into tinkering,
which reeks of stale Diet Coke. Flat, with a bad aftertaste. You might tinker so
much that you either (1) suck the life and voice right out of your novel, or
(2) never submit your manuscript, because it’s not “perfect,” or both.
How do
you know if you’re tinkering? You change paragraphs back to their original
form, and back again. You obsess over word choice beyond what is healthy, or
helpful. You hear that little voice in the back of your brain, but it’s not
perfect, and you can’t bring yourself to hit Send. The black hole of
tinkering can kill your novel, and even worse, it halts your growth as a
writer. Because at this point, you're actually at Step 7.
You're ready to hit Send or move on.
I know it's tough, because you frequently hear: "Don't query until it's ready." And I agree with that statement 100%. Premature querying is a sure-fire way to shoot yourself in the foot. But then again, so is not querying at all. There comes a point when your manuscript IS ready, when you have done everything humanly possibly to make it the very best it can be. Hello Step 7! :D This is when you, the writer, should make a call. Send those queries, go the indie or self-publishing route, or move on to the next book, because maybe *cringe* just maybe, it’s your next book that will be “the one.” But you won’t get there if you’re still tinkering with this one.
So stop.
I know it's tough, because you frequently hear: "Don't query until it's ready." And I agree with that statement 100%. Premature querying is a sure-fire way to shoot yourself in the foot. But then again, so is not querying at all. There comes a point when your manuscript IS ready, when you have done everything humanly possibly to make it the very best it can be. Hello Step 7! :D This is when you, the writer, should make a call. Send those queries, go the indie or self-publishing route, or move on to the next book, because maybe *cringe* just maybe, it’s your next book that will be “the one.” But you won’t get there if you’re still tinkering with this one.
So stop.
Stop tinkering, stop obsessing.
Stop trying to make your manuscript perfect.
Because it will never be perfect. Nothing is perfect. (Even J.K. Rowling’s amazing Harry Potter books contain a typo or two.) But your manuscript can--and should be--great, rising to the level of awesome. And awesome is what (I believe) agents hope lands in their inbox. :)
Have you ever battled with the quest for perfection? And how do you keep it from sabotaging your novel?
*YOU ARE UNIQUE, and so is your writing style. :) Do what works for you. Same for your journey toward publication: it's YOURS. Own it. :) Any thoughts/advice/tips on writing and publishing you find on my blog are my own, and what worked for me. The internet is flooded with writing and publishing thoughts/tips/advice. Use what helps you, and ditch the rest. :) Including this thought. hehe
Clarification: Just to be clear, I'm not advocating shipping out manuscripts full of typos. Far from it. If you've done everything to make your MS the best it can be, you've already run Spellcheck countless times. :) I'm just cheering for you to take the query plunge WHEN YOUR MS IS READY. Don't keep obsessing over word choice forever, letting fear that your MS isn't "perfect" hold you back. :)
Because it will never be perfect. Nothing is perfect. (Even J.K. Rowling’s amazing Harry Potter books contain a typo or two.) But your manuscript can--and should be--great, rising to the level of awesome. And awesome is what (I believe) agents hope lands in their inbox. :)
Have you ever battled with the quest for perfection? And how do you keep it from sabotaging your novel?
*YOU ARE UNIQUE, and so is your writing style. :) Do what works for you. Same for your journey toward publication: it's YOURS. Own it. :) Any thoughts/advice/tips on writing and publishing you find on my blog are my own, and what worked for me. The internet is flooded with writing and publishing thoughts/tips/advice. Use what helps you, and ditch the rest. :) Including this thought. hehe
Clarification: Just to be clear, I'm not advocating shipping out manuscripts full of typos. Far from it. If you've done everything to make your MS the best it can be, you've already run Spellcheck countless times. :) I'm just cheering for you to take the query plunge WHEN YOUR MS IS READY. Don't keep obsessing over word choice forever, letting fear that your MS isn't "perfect" hold you back. :)
